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Game looks good. But right now  the terrible english and grammer, make it utterly unplayable

hi, thanks for your comment, I was releasing updates as fast as I can before I go to the university, in future updates I’m going to publish the script to receive help in that part of the game. Once I finish my internship I’m going to work on that 

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I think this game needs some proofreading for English. I'll do it for free if I have the entire script.

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 You are Britany, a successful girl who get divorced and now she are having a fight against her ex-husband and other companies who are trying to make her down. Make her new path of life and destroy these people who are trying to make you fall.

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My suggestion:

You are Britany, a successful woman, who is fighting against her ex-husband, as well as other people who are trying to take her down. Take control by destroying these people.

(Something along those lines).

thanks ^_^ English is not my main language thats why I used grammarly to correct some issues xD but is not working the best, if you want help me with that I will create a Twitter in some days and pass you the script  from there ^_^ 

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Haha, grammarly is an interesting tool but can't replace native language proficiency ;)

haha that's true, is better with a real person and not an automatic bot xD ^_^

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Should probably fix your overview as you are not Sam you are  Britany.

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ooh thanks for tell me, I think I made a mess cause I change all of it at the end and make a big mess, I'm going to change it now, thanks for the report

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doesn't open? or wont open lol

the game don’t open on your pc? 

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yeah it wont even open for a second, no pop up, not even anything showing up on the task manager lol

lol that is wierd, you are at windows, mac or linux? 

and try re-download it again

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Seems to be that the windows/linux version is missing many files.  That's why it's 1/6th the size, and it only has 3 images, vs 31 in the mac version.  

I think it's basically crashing at launch from the missing files.  

Ok, I think is the zip file, let me check if I can upload it without zip 

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It seems to be a problem with the build of pc, Like you said it was not complete in the zip file, I made a new build and uploaded it, please tell me if it work now. 

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Please tell me you'll include bad endings where Britney gets destroyed and/or pregnant. That's the only thing this game needs.

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Thanks for comment, I'm going to put it on my notes for future chapters ^_^ 

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incredible :) ty

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you welcome ^_^ and ty for your comment